Dammit! You really had something going here. Oh well, loved what you wrote.

Jazz

Shouldn't Annelise be Anneliese?

As for David, his name would be Rosenbaum or Rozenbaum.

I don't know how realistic you want the story to be, be a Jewish man or boy can't dance (or kiss!) with a woman who isn't his wife (he can't touch her). He wouldn't also risk to fall in love with a non Jewish girl, since he can't marry her. I'm sure even more people respected that law in the 1940's.

I love this story and I really can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon! Why exactly do Tanja and the other girls dislike Annaliese so? Is it just because she isn't very wealthy and her clothes are tatty? Or is it David? I'm just curious. I really like your new take on a Holocaust romance, with a Jewish boy instead of a Nazi guard and a Danish girl instead of a Jewish prisoner. I can't wait for the next chapter!

This story rocks! Seriously, I love it! David is so sweet and loving! Annaliese and him just make the cutest couple! Oh, and stupid wut's his name is so...ugh, such a guy! Anyway, I love this story!

Wow, this is great. But I see you have not updated since December...which makes me sad. :(. Hence the sad face. Lol. But anyway, this is great writing. Keep it up! And update soon...please! :)

gross and sickingnig that last chapter but other then that, I like the story and I'll continue reading!

Cool, My little sister just finshed studing WWII in her class and also studied the holocaust. She told me about it and I said I know about it, I learned it in the 6th grade!

This is excellent writing, tastefully done and truly captures to feelings of the occupation. As a Dane myself I found it particularly powerful.
Keep it up!

Hello again! Yea for new chapters. Annelise and David's interaction is superb. And WOW with the date. [shudders] Every girl's worst nightmare, that one. Good scene. Nothing specific this time. Just enjoying the yarn you're spinning. :)

wow this is amazing writing! Keep going with this story. and if you are interested in more Holocaust literature you should read the book "Night" if you haven't already.

I really love this story. It is extremely well written and historically accurate. I really give you credit for that. The plot is also very intriguing and I want to know more!

I like this story! It's pretty accurate, as far as I can tell. Keep going, I want to see what happens next! :)

I do not think your prologue is short at all! It is definately a terrific beginning and I'm already hooked!

Wow! This is a great story! Im really interested and i cant wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
liriel

really good ! I think that the derscription of the german soldier os well written , because it was written with style and not with vulgarity like some others .I also like the fact that the hero in this story is annelise , and not david. Almost every story I read has a male character take the lead and is a nice change to see a female one. Girls rule ! I've recommended ( is it written like that? ) your story to some other people I know , and I hope that they review too . Hint hint :d lol so anyway , get that other chapter here and see ya later !