|Reviews for The Wind is Calling|
| I still love music chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Wow! I liked that!
| simply meg chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
WOW that was amazing! the imagery in this poem made me want to listen more closely to the wind and drift away... thanks for writing it!
| Maisha Mafuriko chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
and though I can not see it, the wind... yet I feel its touch and Yes! I can hear its many calls... Beautifully written.
| Manju chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
ok, it's decided: this is your best poem that i've read! seriously though, great job. this is really deep. i love the personification of the wind and i like the last 7 lines most.
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
this is nice...i liked how you ended it...and thanks for reviewing my poem...
| Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
Yeah that was spiritual like the category said. These kind of poems always give me a floaty feeling. I liked it.
| Escapist chapter 1 . 3/3/2004
This poem is just so relaxing. I don't even have the words... Great job.
| Modern Poet chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
Now that was beautiful. Great softness,flow and imagery! Keep it up!
| WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
I liked this a lot,especially for it being a "wind" poem. It wasn't like ohters. Good Stuff! ; )
| Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
Wonderful; no other words.
| FurballofEvilness chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
m...this is beautiful.
*incredious* you are a wonderful writer! how can you possibly say otherwise!
anyways, i think this is pretty, seriously, just look at the prettiness. *nods* yup. and lookishness...it's about the wind.
how fun is THAT?
I'll calm down now...
| Boadicia chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
Very nice. Just one suggestion - some of the rhymes sound a little bit forced "...blowing past our faces / the path it is taking / just like our fate it races..." you don't have to rhyme all the time and it still sounds good. I especially like the last four lines. Nice work.
| Lauren K chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
ooh, I like this!
| brunette chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
hm.. i donno why you say your work sucks. personally, i think you're good. a little different i'll admit, but good!
| dfgsfdghftgt44 chapter 1 . 12/12/2003
This has some lovely images. Don't say your poetry is crap because it's not. As long as you write from the heart and you write what you think is your best effort, then it's worth more than gold, okay? Great poem. Very enchanting!
Thanks for the review on "The Weak Shall Weep". If I get a chance, then I'll fix that typo. Thanks for pointing it out, too.
~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame