Oh, how could you, how could you, how could you? You just had to RUIN, DESTROY, MURDER, ANNIHILATE the beautiful love between Konah and Saraia. *sob* I think I might just kill myself... K, not really, but still! I've gotta know how you are going to fix it and make them all better again. Because of course they have to get all better again, cuz otherwise what's the point of the entire story? ~sigh~ This is pure torture. I think you might just be sadistic. And thank you thank you thank you for reviewing my story! I just love honest reviews like that. the ones that don't just say "I loved your story you've gotta write more." So thank you so much! ~Gryphon

OH! This is ending so soon! Well, this was an excellent chapter...coz it made me cry! *sobs* Anyways, *snif snif* I hope the ending is not bad for Saraia and Konah! I want them to be together! Oh no! Please don't end it bad! Make it a happy ending, so at least there will be some worth of my tears! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Poor Saradia. Why does the soldiers took her but killed her best friend? Can you explain more about Konah's father? How does he disapper? I think Nial will be good king, i hope. Hurry update soon.

Like it! Update soon plz! :D

i want thank you for this wonderful story. i hope ill be able to see more storylike this one from you in the future.

Looks interesting!

YES! They're gonna escape, right? I'm kinda curious now, though, about Nial. I'm thinking something's gonna happen with him? I'm just guessing... write more soon! ~Gryphon

OMG! HE FINALLY SAID IT! HE SAID IT! LOL! YAY! YEPE! YAHO! WOHOO! Ok, now im on the verge of jumping out of my seat! haha! Anyways, this is a really great story, one im going crazy abt. I just love it! Oh and yeah, it's ok, i mean u'll get used to the 'crazy' American spellings! haha! I myself have spent 7 years in a British school, and when i came to the States, i had a hard time too! But hey, it'll pass. It did for me, and im sure it will for u too. Anyways, great story! Keep goin'! And UPDATE SOON!

Well, I hope that you don't take TOO much time figuring out how to transition. I know those transitions can really suck. I totally hate them with writing, and that's always what takes me forever to update! Heh heh. But yeah. Great story. I really appreciate that you don't focus on the way the king abuses her. WEll, you do with out the horrible details. And Konah is such a great character and a really cool name. I hope the Nial (is that correct?) learns about his father's horrible nature. He should know so that he doesn't become such a bad leader too. Well, at least a lustful rone. Ew. I thought that Konah may be the bastard son, but now I'm not so sure. WE'l see...

wow it's been a long time since i read this, hasn't it? i had to go back and re-read everything since i've practically forgotten it all. but it's all good now. VERY nice writing you have ... and the pain is lifting a little. i loved your depth on this chapter (18) in particular ... because you know ... it's in almost every story, so finding writers who can write this kind of scene that hasn't already been a thousand times is so underrated. great work, really. i'm sorry i haven't kept up. and thank you so much for all your support, too!
~k8

aww.. how incredibly CUTE. i just hope no one saw them... grr, tht evil king! is saraia pregnant?
-THE RANDOM CRITIC-

YES! He finally admits he loves her! YAY! You gotta write more, I wanna see what happens! PLZPLZPLZ!

YAY! You wrote more! Even if it was an incredibly short chappy. (JK) . I wanna find out more!1 plz update again soon!

this story is so intriguing. i want to know more about konah and saraia. please write more.

Dude(ette)! Are you gonna write more or what? You've been on my favorite stories list for weeks, but I have seen no changes... It's a great story, please don't tell my you've given up on it or something! I wanna find out what happens!