Reviews for The Sands of Time
Myriah chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
I know it's late
But I have to say
I love this poem
In every way
Ela-chan chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
Ending if perfection once again.
Blackout the Swordsman chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Another creative new, concept. I suppose time doesn't heal all wounds.
silent reverie chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
I forgot to thank you for all the reviews you gave me, and all the encouraging words! You have a lot of poems here, wow. I think your rhyming is wonderful. Unlike me, you can make it lyrical and not cheesy sounding. :) Hehe, that's why you don't see any rhyming poems by me...
I also really like the word "shards." I must say it again; I really enjoy your word choice. I think that is one of the hardest things about poetry-finding the exact words to convey something perfectly. And you've done a really great job with that.
Spooni chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Great use of imagery; I've used this one before, but never taken it to this level. Very nicely done. A comment though: "the sands of time are shifted." It just sounds odd to me. Perhaps have? Or shifting? And the rhythm, while nice, didn't impress me as much as in some of your other peices.
rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
This flows really well, i could almost sing it... the rhythm was like perfect, and the imagry was nice...
Keep it up!