Reviews for Untitled
Sakura163 chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
I'd think you should read my poem An Epiphany in snow to find my feelings about snow!
*I know shamless plug!*
I too was like that when I was young but now I hate the snow!
It depresses me, but I can look beyond that and say this piece was well written!
James Rain chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
I love this story even more than "Chocolate Smoke." I don't really know why I like it, other than the fine way it is written, but something is wrong with the apostrophes.
Just Wolf chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
i loved that! it was so ... refreshing. the ending was brilliant. "i'm alive and i'm healed and i love the snow" that was such an ecyleptic (sp?) beautiful tantalizing sentance. that was a great story. it threw me abruptly intot he moment and yanked me out again just as i was getting into it. which i think is a very very good thing even if that doesn't really sound like a compliment.