Reviews for the cycle
CloudedSkye chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Cool! Loved the symbolicosity (hehe ;) one of my made up wordosity)On a more serious note, it was great,you obviously (unlike me;)) have a talent (uhoh here it comes , the really dodgy end phrase) keep writing!
(there you go told you it was coming!)
Claes Triela de Sica chapter 1 . 2/17/2004
Excellent, man. Truly awesome. This poem has deep meaning in so many ways. Keep up the great work man.
- Daisuke Yamasaki
BecomingMyself chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
I don't think it is insulting my intelligence explaining your own work, it is just taking away the magic of own interpretation...
Nice analogy, very cleverly written, with a lot of text...
kalariah chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
Sorry I haven't reviewed lately; I've been a mite busy.
I really like the imagery in this.. Relating it all to rain, or water.. very nice. Telling the proper way to read it was helpful, also. I love the line, "There is still room for you in this ocean." Great job! Your poetry is still in my top ten of favorites!
tiphany chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
oh my gosh i love it! at first i was like what the hell i don't get it. Then.. i was like oh, oh, sad. but i love it. i can't say anything but that! i hope your others are like this. i don't know, I love it.