wo... I got the shivers... I know EXACTLY how that feels. keep writing.

Wow. That was just so pretty. I really like it, it speaks to me. I personally think that good poetry has to speak to the reader. But, maybe it's just me. Great work, hope to read more from you! Keep it up!

"My smile stolen..."
Most people believe theft only pertains to objects, or things you can touch and feel. No one seems to see just how many things can be stolen from life. Your heart stolen, your happiness... and just as you put, your smile.
People failed to see, that even if it's an emotional crime, it hurts more than losing your favorite CD player, or.. your flat-screen tv.

i love the last stanza or w/e i can relate to this poem good job!

This poem starts and ends really well. I really like the final paragraph but a few of the paragraphs inbetween dont flow too well and it makes the poem seem really long. Keep writing :)

Strange. I like it. It seems real, kind of. I never thought about that when I look in my mirror. I never really look into my mirror at all, for that matter.
Later,
K.S. Night