|Reviews for Selfmade Pedestal|
| Raya Dronaile chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
the last word summed it up so well, it sounded so cool. great poem yet again!
abd I also liked "Devil-may-care". keep writing!
P.S thanx for the review, and thanx for your help anyways, much appreciated. So if i kinda took your e-mail address and maybe like, chat with you and stuff on msn, would that be ok with you? cuz i don't want to intrude! some ppl though, stop sending me reviews...wierd!
lol, again, thank you!
| me3gogi chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
wow. i cant rhyme. cant. so i admire anyone who can. i write almost prose in my poetry, like a stream of consciousness and i read this, and thought u had written almost prose like poetry - but then i realised, that it had rhymed, and that it was written so well, and almost subtly that i hadnt really picked up on it at first. uve expressed a feeling - several, really well and - expressively. wow. my vocabulary is shrinking rapidly. so - well done.
| Ria Mala chapter 1 . 12/2/2003
Hey. Wow this is an awesome poem. Very full of feeling. I love your feeling..it makes this seem very personal. Which it may be...ha but I dunno cuz I dont know you. Anyways thanks for reading and responding to my poem. I'm glad you liked it cuz it's one of my favs...ttyl