Reviews for Der Geist Im Glashaus
Doska chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
Du schreibst in wunderbaren Bildern. Man sieht buchstäblich einen kleinen Film vor sich.Mächtig traurig das ganze. Schnüff !
BecomingMyself chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
Das ist ein wonderschone Gedicht...Ich glaube, dass ich es verstanden haben. Doch darf ich nicht im Deutsch weiter zu schreiben, weil es ist 20 Jahre her, dass ich etwa im Deutsch geschrieben habe...
But hey, I tried!
I think this is very well written.
How the light is shining into her dark and deep eyes, how the light is breaking deep insight her heart, taking her lifeblood away by memories, while once she had a innocent child inside of her, once she could feel alive, but taken away, she became a lost ghost, that found shelter in a house of glass, now eyes filled with pain looking through, the sound of a sobbing child is heard...
You know, I think this is very well written, and I am taking pleasure in the fact that I took different languages when going through highschool...
Please, write on, and very much thanks for reviewing my works...
I will be back when I have more time to review...