Reviews for The Playground
Furry Elf chapter 2 . 5/17/2005
wonderful. I love the imagery of the chains shrieking. I think it would be better if you put the happy one first, the dark one second. maybe a childhood and an adulthood view? the changes within self and without in the park? _() just an idea.
Ria Mala chapter 2 . 2/21/2004
Wow these 2 pieces are amazingly pretty. I love how you took one thing and gave 2 views of it. And they are seen as completely different. Awesome work!
Lyvain chapter 2 . 2/11/2004
Wow, definately much different than the previous poem! But, all the same absolutely wonderful! Keep writing!
Lyvain chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
Wow! That was so great! The images in my mind were so real... like somewhere I've been before. *shrugs* Anyways, that was excellent! Keep it up!
Seeing Starz chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
Thanks for reviewing. Wow I'm behind. That's an odd perspective on a playground. I never thought of it that way. Awesome.
*Seeing Starz*
Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
this is kind of creepy. _