|Reviews for Children of Dawn|
| Tatterdemalion chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
Beautiful stuff, I love it. The way the words just flow together, like a string of beads mayhap, is great - and yeah, it also helps that I echo your sentiment :-)
Anyways, I'm putting this on my favourites list...
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
That was simply so beautiful and ethereal. I loved the enchanting word choice, and the dazzling imagery in this one. Really awesome. I just HAVE to add htis to my fav's list, I can't help it...even though I made it a point not to add too many things in my list anymore...i can't help it, its so good...
| Protege chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
This poem...it is soft. It seems to advise simplicity and humulity. I like it, though. It is not angsty. I like your use of language too: "And in pools of light, cast with shadow lines, bathe" Gj.
| cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
This is absolutely beautiful. Such wonderful use of words, which you have linked together to form a string of stunning images. Such a calming and inspiring piece. This is going on my favourites. Keep writing :)