Reviews for Angel In Disguise |
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![]() ![]() ![]() O.O Aaaaw again! So I think this story is really cool but I can see that its been AGES since you last updated so I'm gonna assume you won't be updating in the future which is sad but I guess that's how it is sometimes. Anyway, thanks for writing some at least :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaw! This is so cute :) A little mistake: 'and you always lok so miserably' should be 'look so miserable' probably :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() *rubs hands together* Ooh, interesting... I love it so far. ;D |
![]() ![]() I really love the story. I guess because it really hits home. When I was in high school I was involved with a female teacher. I was only a few months shy of 18 when it all began. We stayed together for four years. You have a wonderful writing ability, a vivid imagination and wonderful word usage. |
![]() ![]() OMG with a teacher. |
![]() ![]() NU! So sad, yet happy...evil chiffys! Please update! I'll give you cookies! Your story rocks! It's so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please please continue! This story is great! |
![]() ![]() WE! Me like! Me like! Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wai! I love it! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story so fic & I've added it to my fave list. Plz update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the blatantcy of the guys in this story. Its so great. Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! it was shocking even to read that. I mean we're barely into the first chapter and all of a sudden we're experiencing a MAJOR turning point in this boys life. (not that that's a bad thing, your suddenness tht is) i can only imagine what travis must be thinking. I hope you give us more insight into what he's thinking and feeling in the nexy chapter. Your writing is very good and you have a few lines that really stand out. " Travis felt dirty and out of place here. He wasn't rich or smart. He was a street punk that had lived in poverty his entire life." NICE! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great story Plz update soon,k:) |