Although I've already read this, I'm going to give it a review here. A little bit on the shorter side compared to some of your other poems, but wonderful none the less. (Not that shortness is a bad thing.) I really like the mental image you get from the first line or so. The whole poem gives the reader an insight...you can feel the emotions behind the words. All I can say is that this is a great piece of writing, even if you were a little crazy when you wrote it. Remember, if you ever need to talk or a shoulder to cry on, I'll be there. You don't have to necessarily be the one you choose to gift with your insight, but I'll be there just in case you do. (And if you ever need a break, ask away. I'll come over there to Torrance and MAKE people give you one or take over your share of work if that's what it comes to.) Ogenki de, Chibi-sama.