Hey this is easily song material. U should write it into a song with music and give it to us so we can practise. Again, an outstanding poem. i love them all and wish u had more so i could read them. I wish u would check out and review some of my other stuff. Anyway...keep up tha great work. :)
burning for revenge

WOW, talk about being smacked in the face, shit man, you really have been there haven't you, check out '10 by 10' i think you could relate, but this isn't about me, you really have got a grip of this whole deal may it be mental illness, teenage angst, or something worse, a really terrifyingly delicious feast of anxiety, nice one.
Kenzie

cool! like lyrics from a rap song!
summerdazed