Reviews for Torn
haunted moonlight chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
i love this poem! its simply amazing!
Ali Rat chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
wow... i love the ideaof fallen angels...
Alwryan chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
hey i like the haikus and all but you should try to break out into a longer type of thing lol neways good job
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
aw very very sad.. awesome poem
Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
sad... *sniffle* that was an incredible haiku. I love the second line, "crystal eyes" is simply an incredible description. Awesome job.
write on.
Alannah60 chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
I liked this alot, your good use of language makes it to read!