woah! nice. made me think, n then think some more (which is a rare thing... no wait... lemme think about this one...)! I love it! if you can you should continue it. nicely written. oh so nicely.

~dark ink*don't take life seriously*

Why the hell won't you finish this? It is amazing! We need more writers like you! lol

Please e-mail me if possible about why you haven't updated!

-Delanie

Please, continue with the story. There is definately room for more chapters.

Wow! That is an awesome story, but freaky...very freaky...

Whoa, wicked freaky! It makes me wonder. Beautifully written.

Well-written, but so...creepy!

oh GOD that's freaky. but also so very good and wellwritten and perfect...and ohmygod its freaky! ahh that's gunna haunt me for a while now...i thought it was just her imagination for part of the time, but i had to go back and reread it and then i caught the bit at the end...about the wrist...AH! *nightmares* but oh yes, good, VERY good!

This beginning is well written,intriguing and the characters have vivid descriptions
also AFI is amazing and so is silver and cold

O.O Hey its me! Good chapter! Whats gonna happen next? .