Reviews for A Perfect Game |
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![]() ![]() id read both glad your making sequels! |
![]() ![]() ok yea i know i made the mistake of not reading your last little note of this is the last chapter...hehehehe my bad. I would love to read both stories. Its hard to say which one I would want to read first because there both in the same time period. so...im fifty fifty here. Of course that wasnt much help to you. I love your stories! |
![]() ![]() yay i'd read both! u no i love ur story so much i think u should do the sequal 1st but still do da companion one just later my story 50 bucks later is actually gonna have 2 companion stories hehe but i have 2 finish puttin this one up 1st...lolz please read it! its under neecoal924! cant wait 4 ur new story! bye ~nikki |
![]() ![]() You just made my day by announcing a sequel. I would love to read a sequel because your writing is wonderful and I love your characters, especially Trent and Ally. I'm really looking forward to the first chapter! |
![]() ![]() a sequel is a definate YES! i mean, i worship this story and i really want more sappy stuff! update soon because i check everyday to see if you have updated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww shucks, you're making me blush. But you're welcome, and you'd better start posting soon! As for the title, I still think "A perfect-er Game" is best...:) BTW, do you know if Yankees24635 has posted the next chapter yet? |
![]() ![]() would totally read the sequal |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would read both as I love this story (been reading it the whole time) adn would love a sequel or a branch off. baby-gurl88 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would definitely read (and review!) both of them. And you HAVE to post them at the same time because I want to read them both but I don't want to have to wait... I'm not a very patient person, epecially when I love something as much as I do your stories! ;-P Saharian |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...I would review all the chapters like I usually do, but I think that would take me too long. I wish I could write like you. Great work! -Anywien |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the story of Rob and Daisy would be interesting and I would prefer reading that to a sequel. But if you do do a sequel, it would be nice to stay clear of just adding more drama for them to go through since that can just become and ongoing..they get fight, they get back together..they fight again. Maybe you might want to consider developing more on the parent and Trent relationship or something like that. Well good luck and good job on finishing this story. |
![]() ![]() First of all i want to say that i loved your story, and i was sad to see that it was done. But, youre doing a sequel, yay! and when you mentioned that you didnt want the title to be "A more perfect game" i thought it would be cute if it was "a perfect life" (but its only a suggestion and it would only work if the ending was all happy and stuff). i hope you do the sequel first cuz i cant wait to see whats going to happen to trent and ally next. |
![]() ![]() hello! omg that was so sweet! i love trent he's so awsome now i have to go out, find a b-f, and tell him this story about trent proposing and b like hint hint lol i also wanna say i really really appreciate u reviewing my story cuz i no im not such a great writer and well u r! so thanks. well it was a fantabulous story and the ending was perfect! ~nikki |
![]() ![]() at first, i didn't want to review cause it's the 44th chapter and you have 4 reviews, it sort of looked fitting but i decided that i have to review and tell you what a wonderful story you have created. i love it so much. i love your creativity and literally everything in this story, even the bad bits but hey, the bad bits are what makes the story interesting. oh, i've better go before i turn insane. anyway, if you have any future works, you can bet i'll be there to read it. keep on writing! |
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