Great bar scene with the apples! LOL! Enjoying your story!

Aw Trent called her back to meet him. How did that guy get into the players parking lot? What an ass. Ally hung up on Rock! LOL! Maybe Tristan will get to mee him!

I still think Leonard is a bit weird, but if he can be true to Ally, then he's got to be ok...even if he does have feelings for her. So Trent sees Ally at the games. Oh and I liked the author Rock. Margot was a vapid bitch!

Sounds like Ally is tired and cranky and not happy with her agent. I don't blame her...especially if he's trying to make her write what he's been trying to sell...not her real feelings or words. I'm not sure revenge is the best way...

So Leonard won't let Ally go home. He gave her the reasons she needed to hear...sigh...

Oh I am a big baseball fan and I love that Ally is. Season tickets to the Yankees...wow! So Trent eh? I wonder when they will meet. I'm not sure I like Leonard very much...he keeps telling Ally that his business would be nothing without her...and he loves her but he's married. Not on my high list of attribrutes.

Enjoyed this first chapter. I like your Ally character. I wonder why she hides behind her writing? She says she has friends, yet she needs her cat to keep her eating. Enjoying.

Sweet :D

It can't be a ring! Nope. I think it's a necklace. :D

I'm not going to lie, Ally seems like a wh ore.

She's slept with Trent, then Rock then gross Rob.

And they she almost got it on with Joey.

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That was so well written. I loved just about everything... the plot, the characters, the drama...

It was a great ending to a great story.

I have finally finished this, it was amazing. The writing was very mature, even though it was filled with romance, it wasn't over the top and boring. I liked how their relationship developed, because it seem to me, before they broke up for the first time, their journey was too smooth and the foundations were weak. The moment when he scored a perfect game was so beautiful (and I didn't even think that it was too cheesey). Thank you very much.

Wow! I absolutely fell in love with the characters. Has anyone ever told you that your a really great writer? :)

There were just a few confusing parts but in the end everything sorted out perfectly!

I'm guessing that it's because you went to Standford? haha.

Keep up the awesome work!

-Alex

i loved this story so much. i'm a die hard sox fan myself, but i love baseball in general. you did everything perfectly. it was just the perfect balance of romance and baseball, and what else does anyone really need in life? there arent many stories that can make me want to jump up and down when the main characters get engaged, but this one did. trent is amazing, and i wish he were real...

OHMYGOD!

LOVE THIS STORY! TRENT & ALLY FOREVER!

FABULOUS. YES, I KNOW THAT YOU FINISHED IT ABOUT 6 YEARS AGO. STILL LOVED IT.

AMAZING.

PS. SORRY FOR THE CAPS LOCK. THAT LAST CHAPTER GOT ME ALL GIGGLY AND HAPPY AND SMILEY.