Reviews for A Perfect Game |
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![]() ![]() ![]() IMPRESSIVE! Your dialogue has improved! I want to know more about Leonard's love for Ally...and about Ally's writing...maybe a sample? I love you sweetie and I love this peice! -Marry |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a pretty "darn" good story. Please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this looks like a really good beginning to a story! dont really have any suggestions besides update soon! (please) hehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() a great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! You have such an incredible writing style. I always love reading your stuff, but this one is especially good. Keep goin'! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. I'm looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent work darling. LOVE THE DESCRIPTIONS! You're dialogue is...not as superb, but better than most I've seen. Keep it up! I heart you! -Marry |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very enticing, a great start! I can't wait for the next chapter! I love the way you develop your charactors and I am very intrigued by Ally. Great beginning! Now keep it up and update soon! Vilverin |