Reviews for A Perfect Game
Rosemarry Underhill chapter 2 . 12/7/2003
IMPRESSIVE! Your dialogue has improved! I want to know more about Leonard's love for Ally...and about Ally's writing...maybe a sample? I love you sweetie and I love this peice!
You Need More Flair chapter 2 . 12/7/2003
This is a pretty "darn" good story. Please write more.
IwishMyNameWasZoe chapter 2 . 12/7/2003
this looks like a really good beginning to a story! dont really have any suggestions besides update soon! (please) hehe
SAngel chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
a great start!
All The Three Queens chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
I love it! You have such an incredible writing style. I always love reading your stuff, but this one is especially good. Keep goin'!
You Need More Flair chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Cute. I'm looking forward to more.
Rosemarry Underhill chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
Excellent work darling. LOVE THE DESCRIPTIONS! You're dialogue is...not as superb, but better than most I've seen. Keep it up!
I heart you!
Vilverin chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
This is very enticing, a great start! I can't wait for the next chapter! I love the way you develop your charactors and I am very intrigued by Ally. Great beginning! Now keep it up and update soon!
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