Reviews for teardrops
Rosa Vernal chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
god, angsty, sad stuff
i give it three thumbs up
(one for sytle, one for content, and one more because I felt like it :P)
Needa S chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
I like the deth you created in this piece...Excellent piece!
tina bena chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
i really love this gave me chills...i can relate to it with one of my own friends..very well written
Jordan Lyga chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
wow, nice metaphors. the realism is awesome, and it is evident you lived through an experience close, if not the same as the one you described in your poem. i think i have the lived close to the same thing as well. i like it. keep writing.