Reviews for Pins and Needles
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
WOw...just brilltent! i love this piece...amazing work!
fontanellemonster chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
Ha, that was aboslutely fucking awesome. Truly. I don't know why. I am the most useless reviewer because I can't tell you what I love so much about it but...there's something cool there. Maybe the needles. Needles are pretty cool. You can pierce yourself (the most satisfying thing ever).
mykenism chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
this is one of my favorites. it's violence is beautiful. i imagine slowly pushing needles into the soft skin of a female.
Athiel chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
EW! Ok, I'm scared of you now...don't come near me...
It didn't even rhyme. I'm not a big fan of free verse, but it was ok.
Very nice (well, not _nice_) descriptive words. I love description. Excellent.
FireflyPDP chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Really nice imagery there... (shoving pins and needles into your eye? ew!) But the rhythm seems off. Of course, it's harder to tell when the song doesn't rhyme either. :P