|Reviews for War|
| White-Mage-Of-Death chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Cooliness. The last line makes it. :)
| Jackaroe chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
WOW! I loved this poem too! YOu are very good at writing down words about different issues. Keep up the great work! Hoping to read more from you!
| Archer In The Shadows chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
This is amazing... good job.
| Queen of the Harpies chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Very prophetic. Prophetic is good. War is such an..amazing subject. So much emotion involved, and so much to write about there. Regret, Love, Betrayal..ah, what can I say? I'm big on emotional writing. This is a very good work. I like how it doesn't rhyme and the way you set it up to be read. So often people screw up free verse poetry..you pulled it off beautifully.
| Wandering Phoenix chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Wow, great job! Very interesting and powerful-I'm impressed. I think I may have reviewed something of your's before...I think I'll go check that now!
Again, great poem!
| acccountkiller chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Hmm..kinda confusing..I mean it's good but then...first you think it's a bit optimistic..naive even..and then it goes into a different direction...don't like to criticise seeing as everoyne has got their style..Keep writing! Love, Mia