Reviews for War
White-Mage-Of-Death chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Cooliness. The last line makes it. :)
Jackaroe chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
WOW! I loved this poem too! YOu are very good at writing down words about different issues. Keep up the great work! Hoping to read more from you!
Life's Angel
Archer In The Shadows chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
This is amazing... good job.
-S├ęgolin
Queen of the Harpies chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Very prophetic. Prophetic is good. War is such an..amazing subject. So much emotion involved, and so much to write about there. Regret, Love, Betrayal..ah, what can I say? I'm big on emotional writing. This is a very good work. I like how it doesn't rhyme and the way you set it up to be read. So often people screw up free verse poetry..you pulled it off beautifully.
Wandering Phoenix chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Wow, great job! Very interesting and powerful-I'm impressed. I think I may have reviewed something of your's before...I think I'll go check that now!
Again, great poem!
~Wandering Phoenix~
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Hmm..kinda confusing..I mean it's good but then...first you think it's a bit optimistic..naive even..and then it goes into a different direction...don't like to criticise seeing as everoyne has got their style..Keep writing! Love, Mia