Reviews for Locked
Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
Some very powerful imagery relating to the topic here, the poem is very to the point, and doesn't talk for too long about anything other than the subject... and I think that a lot of people can relate to this at some point in their lives.
SincereRhetoric chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
You seem to be stuck on the cage thing huh? Umm...step outside the box/cage and try something new and fresh!
White-Mage-Of-Death chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Hm, this kinda reminds me of one of my poems... coincidence? I think...
sparke chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
Nice imagery. And metaphors. Good job!
behind the velvet curtain chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
That's really good...I like it.
The structure of it reminds me of a friend if mine's...it's all choppy and repeative. I like it.
~Keep writing
Jackaroe chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
OMG! This one is really good. I enjoyed reading it a lot. I know exactly what it feels like to fall into darkness. I think i have fallen into depression too many times. lol. Anywayz, this was really good. Great job!
Life's Angel
Archer In The Shadows chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Wow... this is great! I love the use of metaphors!
-S├ęgolin