|Reviews for To Become a Suitable Heroine|
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 25 . 3/27
For the most part, I really enjoyed this story. I loved the idea of the heroine constant and really enjoyed the characters. The humour was a little bit over the top in some places, but it was still well done. I did like your dialogue and how smoothly this was written. Ray was also a very enjoyable character. Great story!
| Zabel Seishimugen chapter 25 . 2/26
Great job, mate. Pity there's no wedding, but the promise of one through the final kiss makes up for it rather well. Keep up the good work.
| Flurries-Of-Magic chapter 25 . 2/21
Excellent for my first story read on here. I must say, I liked the different characters and enjoyed them all in my own way. I almost wish it hadn't ended, but that'd be a little unfair to you. All in all, hilarious, original, and straightforward. Nicely done.
| 0u0 chapter 25 . 1/29
I absoLUTEly love this story and this is like the third time I've read it. It is absolutely beautiful and funny and crazy and great in every possible way. I feel connected to Ray and her situations however in the earlier chapters discussing her mother I just didn't feel all that sad until it went into greater detail (later chapters after her dead mom has been revealed). But even still it didn't compare to the sadness I felt when she left Ash. Maybe because I have some sadness over my non-existent love-life but whatever.
Loved it a lot as always even thought (I think) this is the first time I've reviewed to this particular story. xD Sorry :/
| Anonymous chapter 25 . 1/19
Your da boss! A! First-rate! It's a heartwarming, yet witty and humourous story!
| Guest chapter 25 . 1/15
Your story's adorable. Your strengths of humor and lightheartedness could really get you somewhere someday. :)
| FlameOtter chapter 8 . 12/28/2014
Waaaah. Kitties are cute.
The contests never fail to be interesting!
Keep it up...
| FlameOtter chapter 5 . 12/28/2014
The domino effect was cool...
I hope it's not annoying to receive more than one review per person...
Well, I'm hoping for Ash and Ray to finally...meet? I guess?
| FlameOtter chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
Exciting...looking forward to the rest...
Which you already posted...ok. Yep.
| Lazerkat chapter 20 . 12/26/2014
Hey, I love your story so far. Rash is adorable and if they can't be together in this story then I will come and...you know...*evil grin*
| Guest chapter 25 . 12/22/2014
Hi, I'm Nightcrawlerfw and you convinced me to review even though it is 12:30 at night and it is all your fault that I'm up this late in the first place. I read hp fanfiction. I never knew about fiction press. I had just finished a story and the author referred readers to their fiction press site to read more stories, I then discovered this site. None of their stories sounded good so I went searching and found your story! This was my first story read on this site and my first review in this site. I fell in love with this story and the characters. It was very funny and clever. I want to marry Ash now, ahem, I have a case known as having crushes on imaginary characters. Thanks for creating one more imaginary guy I can never date. ;) Well I'm going to sleep now. Buh bye!
| Harry Lizzy chapter 25 . 11/30/2014
Oh! I loved this story sooo much and I am so upset it's over. This has got to be one of the best things I have ever read. It makes me want to laugh and cry; it is just to good. Thank you for writing such a beautiful masterpiece. Thank you :D
| princessoftheshadowsofdestiny chapter 10 . 11/23/2014
this story litterally made me laugh so hard i turned purple. My brother was so worried!
| iheartdecimalpoint chapter 3 . 11/1/2014
It was funny and nice... and I can guess whho 'Ash' is :D I love purple, so purple eyes and hair is awesome to me! cu! C:
| iheartdecimalpoint chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
personally, I think it's great, even if that's mainly cuz it's funny :D