|Reviews for Idle Eyes|
| Verbal Essence chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
you have a crazy talent for writing about dark and depressing topics
vivid descriptions, and darkly metaphorical, good work
| Animagess chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
Very graphic imagery, but fairly well done. The punctuation chops up the smoothness of the rhythm and makes it sound like someone should be stating it instead of saying it with emotion, but it's not really that big of a deal. Very interesting and morbid, with a kind of two-point focus that makes it even more effective. Good job.
| NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
oh, interesting. I like it. Its cool