Reviews for Serenity's Era
HeavenlySecrets chapter 7 . 1/7/2004
Wow! That was really cool! Pff...I want to be a kitten demon! ;) jk. I want special powers though! That would rock! Yup, I'm a freaky deaky chickie and I'm proud of it! _ UPDATE! LOVE IT!
xo*Heavenly*xo
HeavenlySecrets chapter 6 . 1/6/2004
well that was an odd but still awesome chapter! Ya know, I just thought how much it would seriously, suck to be sucked into a book and just vanish without anyone knowing where you were. hm...pity. _ Update!
xo*Heavenly*xo
HeavenlySecrets chapter 5 . 1/5/2004
I'm still loving it! I keep mixing up Rae and Rei. I say their names backwards...ya know what I mean? lol Yeah but I'm reviewing every chapter! _
xo*Heavenly*xo
snap-ie9086 chapter 3 . 1/5/2004
hey my g/f freind told me this was a good story so I took a moment of my busy day to read up to chapter 1 and it was great but scince I have things to do places to be (god dammit I'm late) i g2g
oi also cheak out Loosing hope (message from happy-go-lucky she said you'd probably enjoy it )
Get Lucky 101 chapter 7 . 1/5/2004
five that's all lol well any ways I got confused does kyan have two differet color of eye's ? but any ways great storie and update soon
love always
happy-go-luk
Get Lucky 101 chapter 6 . 1/5/2004
hey I got a little confused but my brains probalaby isn't working to well but any ways you should try to stick to one language because not many people are majoring in japanese as a seconde language ) well ja
love always
happy-go-luk
Get Lucky 101 chapter 5 . 1/4/2004
its really great so far but why does every one who gets the book write in it I mean if it's not there's should they like not vandelize it 'as soom might say' well I'll have to go for tonight (gotta share the love lol)
love always
happy-go-luk
Get Lucky 101 chapter 4 . 1/4/2004
hey that was a good chapter sry anout the review per chapter but that's kinda a small habit with me (to-do list ~get rid of bad hibbits) lol but ja 4 now
love always
happy-go-luk
Get Lucky 101 chapter 3 . 1/4/2004
hoh- that was chapter but it's still a little fuzzy on who tells the story or is it just in 3rd person I luv how you turly captured a true 16 year old boy lol
Get Lucky 101 chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
hey I just read the summary ( not the book yet so I might not even know what I'm talking about but I'm reading it next *mraks of to-do list*) but doesn't it sound like a cross between fushigi yugi and harry potter 2 j/w I'll have to read more though to find out I guess well ja
Lappy chapter 6 . 1/2/2004
Okay, well it was a good chapter ... * shifty eyes * freaky book ...
Anyway, what I was saying by improving was just that ... you really do need to look over your work word-by-word; trust me, it works. You'll catch the little typos and mistakes that you overlook because you're so excited about writing (I know the feeling ... don't deny it ... and ignore me I act weird).
I can't really point out every little mistake and stuff cause ... I'm just too impacient and lazy ...
Anyway, don't worry about it too much; just keep writing -!
Lappy chapter 5 . 12/30/2003
Okay, another good chapter. Now, I don't want to sound mean but you may just want to look over your writing really closly; I mean word-by-word to see if there are any mistakes. Anyway, that's about it and keep on writing!
suzenkou chapter 5 . 12/18/2003
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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suzenkou chapter 4 . 12/18/2003
Cool story! I'm about to read the rest. And it is a little like FY. But who wouldn't base one of their first stories off of one of Yuu Watase-sama's stories? Fushigi Yuugi is one of the best! Anyways cool story, hope ya update soon after this. And if you would, read some of my stories? Ya don' gotta but if ya want to ya could.
JA
HeavenlySecrets chapter 4 . 12/16/2003
*ahem* I have something to discuss with you about your story. All I have to say is MARVELOUS DARLING! *snickers at self* haha great! but NO cliffhangers! damnit. _ Anywho, I'll be waiting for the next chappie!
xoxo*Heavenly
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