Reviews for Staring
Tired Recluse chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
The last line was a little.. abrupt, but that makes it better. Give the reader a suprise. Heh-heh. Keep writing!
Tutube chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
Awesome poem, and very well written. my favorite lines were those 4 lines:
"You think you are so much better
Because you're older than me
Well,
Guess what
You're not"
anyways, good job, keep it up! _