|Reviews for The death of despair|
| Sylvia Sylverton's reviews from fanfiction.net chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
Reviewer Date Chapter Type
Silvi 2004-01-19 1 Anonymous
I really, really like your poem. I dont know much on how to give review on poem but Ill try my best...I was once told that for a good poem there has to be a red line that conects the whole piece, theres not necessery a visible one but still... your poem, to me, has that not to mention the imagery the words provocted in me. I wouldnt be lieing if I told you that one of the reason I like it is because there is a flow in the piece, a rythm. So what would be my rating?
Arrmaitee 2003-12-14 1 Signed
That was really beautiful. BRAVO! I said it before - you have a true sense of the human condition. That's a rare gift. One of the things that I've learned as an author is that we all have strengths. Mine is comedy, yours is insight. Use it!
| Arcania chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
very true. but it will never happen. keep dreaming though.
| antiquatednotions chapter 1 . 12/6/2003
Imagery was very apparent, and it read almost like a melody.