Reviews for Hit The Wall
Force1295 chapter 1 . 12/21/2003
I sense great anger in this poem. No one deserves to be told that they deserve death. Someone who said that will always get their come-upins in life. Just hang in there.
Orange 6ix chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
I love this, it's so truthful.
'life has no meaning, I don't see why,
I should try to carry on, when I've lost all will to try.'
I get that feeling so much, and it's great that someone can describe my feelings so beautifully.
I pity the person who has the clean your brains from the wall...
Neried chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
So bitter!It really works for this poem though. It's so true...
But anyways, How on earth do you manage to write all this great poetry and make it RHYME? That's what I call talent! I can't rhyme to save my life, and here there are poets who can rhyme, make it make sense, AND be good writers ar the same time! Amazing!
Heartless-trinity chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
Wow, that poem holds so much anger, and sadness. I hope it's not true, no one should wish to die. . . your poem is really good though!
AAGoddess-of-the-Ocean chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
OOh that had a lot of feeling in it! Good job! :)
ps) PLEASE read and review my stories - PLEASE? #0.o# *puppy dog eyes*