I got all smileyhappy reading this; very cute ]

Wow.
Lynz told me she got the name Tays from you so I though I'd come see... this is a really, REALLY good piece. Flawless, I'd call it. I don't understand what they're about to do (suicide pact jumps to mind but maybe it's just me) but I still love it.
*hugs*
amazing.

Oh, wow! That's so awesome! It's all happy and joyful and it totally just made my day!

Gorgious. Bloody genious.
For a while there, I wasn't sure what they were doing, but I suppose that adds to the draw and suspense of the story. Nicely written.
~Sasa

This is fantastic. It's a really emotional/sadstory, but its also full of have a look at my stories.
I.C.T

ur stories r realy good u should write some more so i can read them.

Say, have you posted it under another name? Because I know I've read it before. At first I wasn't sure but now I am, 100% sure. Well, it's a good story, very sweet. :)

Hello, I don't know if I have read this story yet but I am sure it is very good. I will read it at some point.

I really love this part: [I smile at him as bravely as I can, and reach out shaky hand to tease through his hair lovingly, a gesture designed to soothe my own nerves more than his.] It's very true. I love your writing :)

love the last paragraph, getting rid of all inhibitions...
sweet, nice story. you should have said that it was a one shot on the summary, but i love those, so i don't mind.
the line about being attracted t omaturity and bacnk balance... it reminds me of something i wrote once, in a project about Oscar Wilde *bows in reverence* about him and Bosie. anyway, nive story, i liked it. well done. more please.