|Reviews for A Beautiful Disgrace|
| Your Execution chapter 13 . 1/20/2010
Haha beofre I read the last chapter (and read chapter 12's authors note) i freaked out and started screaming, scaring my dog. I said "IT BETTER BE A F*ING HAPPY ENDING. I WILL CUT YOU BISH!" I am glad to know I do not have to "cut" you xD AWW MY GOSH I LOVE THIS STORY :D
| Night-Rayne chapter 13 . 6/6/2009
aw wow, that was cute, but this last chapter really needs to be edited
| ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 14 . 2/27/2009
i love your story it definitely needs to get published...
by the way...i love your taste in songs...i m a huge fan of Nirvana and orgy,...
i'll say this again...your story is AWESOME...
| Valerie chapter 13 . 1/17/2009
Very good story, I enjoyed reading it this evening, instead of working like I should have been doing. :P However it's such a shame that you rushed through the last chapter. It could have been good but so many words are missing that it's frustrating to read and ruins the pleasure of reading the ending. Your story deserves better than that. Here are just a FEW of the examples I copied from the last chapter.
"'re a you're going to shine like will fall in love with you, like how I 're gonna light up the stage
" like how you did on me prove myself." He pleaded.
"It reminds me of and sparkling." Adrian said
"Let me show you who I really your faith in me again.
they knew that they had knew that they were strong together
If you have the time it would be worth just reading through it again and filling in the gaps. :) but welldone on all the other chapters!
| Cafune chapter 13 . 12/24/2008
I absolutely loved this :D I'm so sad that it's over though. I'm in love with Adrian :)
| BellaEzrebetFang chapter 14 . 8/29/2008
Seriously awesome! :D
| kirarin242 chapter 2 . 3/28/2008
luved it XD!
| kirarin242 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
sounds pretty good :}!XD!
| NightOfAThousandNightmares chapter 13 . 8/28/2007
I loved it!
I really enjoyed this. I am glad you write.
| NightOfAThousandNightmares chapter 7 . 8/28/2007
I really do like this story. I like the way you aren't making it a typical romance, sorta of a master/slave love, you know?
I hve one question: Is this the way you think goths are like? IT's sounds more punk to me.
THat is my only comment. I will keep on going!
| Frosted Midnight chapter 13 . 4/22/2007
This was really good, i loved it. it was very well thought out, and it turned out well!
| MandyRenae chapter 14 . 7/17/2006
Hey! I just have to say, I loved your story. It was so sweet. I have one request, I have a story posted, and i know it's not very good, but I would like your opinion on how I could make it better and everything. I always take constuctive critisism very well.
| cjz chapter 13 . 5/8/2006
An amazing story. The title suits it perfectly. I love how you brought a new spark to this almost cliche storyline. It's beautifully written. You should honestly consider submitting it to a publisher. _
| Firespirit44 chapter 13 . 4/16/2006
Aw..very touching story. Keep up the good work.
| Oleander Vyne chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
Kickarse story. I know I'm a little late, but my friend just pointed out this story. She's a little dim...Good story!