Reviews for You Walk On
Just me.Jessie B chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
I'd really like to print this one too. This sounds just like me the other day when i broke up with my boyfriend for cheating on me and he didn't care so it was like he was walking out not me. I loved it by the way.
MICHLOSTSOUL chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
That was really good. I read this and I felt the loniness and vulnerability you were trying to get across. An author does their job when the reader can feel the poem. Like I said I felt this one. Great job. Oh and please review some of my poems. I have reviews but their from my goofy friends lol and I need an honest opinion lol.
Sarpedon chapter 1 . 12/23/2003
very good. or atleast i really liked it.
cant remember if i said this in my last post so i'll say it again. will you send me an e-mail with the history for 'Dear Father' please? my address is on my profile thing.
keep it up!
Sarpedon x
LegendaryPunk29 chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Nice, ver nice poem. I liked it hella lot. I esp. liked the last 2lines. It souded very nice. Nice work herre, keep writing!
If u can, plz r and r some of my work too, it will mean a lot to me!