Reviews for She Walks
Ela-chan chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
Such a strong, womanly poem. I give you no higher praise than that.
Blackout the Swordsman chapter 1 . 5/20/2004
"She moves, yet will not be moved." I like that. This is certainly a change of pace from your other poems.
karla chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
This poem was dedicated to me and I really enjoyed it and I thank Jess for it. It was great and it's nice to see what strong, great words she chose for me.
JustForgetMe chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
Hey this is good.i like it.i wish i could find the strength to walk on like she did.
Morbane chapter 1 . 12/21/2003
I like this because it is very stately, and that emphasises the courage and dignity. I'm not sure the rhyming all works, but I think it's good that the rhyming isn't too obvious, more in the background. It sounds rather like a pledge of identity. Very nice.
Sheeba chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
You really must know a person well to have such a glance at their heart. I know how much you care for her just by reading these words. You have history together, good and bad. You feel her hurt and happiness. All that comes through from the poem. I think she will love it! :)
Letters to No One chapter 1 . 12/9/2003
I like this one, very much so.