|Reviews for Losing Grip|
| AVIGON chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
That last line definitely made it worthwhile. Nothing like anything I've ever seen before.
| Mime chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
Ai, I read Root and Anjeni's tyburn too, and I am also amazed by them, as I am by yours.
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 12/19/2003
I really do like this form. Very nice.
Heart of the Sword
| glitterjewele chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
this is really cool! i've never seen this format before, it's neat, it fascinates me. :P the last little bit "i can't hold on to you" was awesome, i wasn't expecting it at all, gave the piece a lot more depth to add to the great sounds and images. excellent poem!
| crazyflower chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
I can't put my finger on why I like this so much...it's simple, yet effective. It seems to me to capture some sort of desperation or frenzy because of the repetition. Anyway. I like. I think I might do one now, because I thought that was so interesting. Thanks to you and Children of the Root
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
That is really cool! I've never written one of these before, so I might someday...I love this one. It is so eerie, so desperate, so frightening...it is awesome imagery that just put me in that moment. great job here.
| The Black Rider chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
I've never read a Tyburn before, so maybe I'm just virgin to this kind of writing, but I didn't like the repitition that much. It sort of got on my nerves after a while. Maybe I'm not being open-minded enough. Sorry.
| Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
A very interesting style... I love it. Excellent job, keep it up!
| Jimmy Jazz chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
CotR's was brilliant, and this was no less than. Very creepy, a love it.
| Children of the Root chapter 1 . 12/9/2003
I like it! Awesome work. I love the second to last line. Its so cool.