ooh, that was sad! but i thought it was great, it told a story and it rhymed! :] i saw this because i suck at rhyming, i find it hard.
i envy your rhyming skills...

Awesome! That's so cool! I wish I could write poetry * pout * but I can't ... Well! It was awesome (again)!

wow i really like it! its very powerful, and the rhyming works really well! i would just change to "leap from wall to wall"

Hey I loved it! I think it's sad but it's still a really good poem! I wish I could write like that! *hides in corner trying to out smart Miss Bliss*
_ Awesome and keep it up!
Rock on!
xoxo*Heavenly