O, I really like this story! Interesting tale.

*smiles* not bad at all! You still have the magical touch! I was just wondering, when are you going to continue your Fushigi fics? *gives chibi puppy eyes*

This is really good so far. I'm usually a signed review, but won't let me log in for some insane reason. Anyway, this is a really good original idea, Well Done!
roze x

Perfect.
No, really, it is. I've been waiting for something original by you for a long time, and my patience has been rewarded. Well done, friend!

*Sitting cross-legged, wide-eyed* Dude. That was AWESOME! And dragons! Wuvly, wuvly dragons... *Snuggles 'em all*
Moving along.
I like the characters. Namely Maria. And I like how you have it all flow together - and the interruptions from the twins are definitely something that would have happened in real life! Most authors forget details like that (listening children are quiet and attentive and blah, blah, blah), but I'm pleased to see you didn't.
Two words: More, please. _