Reviews for Playing With Fire
TOI chapter 1 . 3/9/2005
Yo, funny hilarious in a kinda one eye-brow lifted kinda way. Prob some inside jokes in there or else i'm just stupid. Well, enjoy yerself and dont catch fire, it hurts. At least it does for the first coupla minutes _
CascaOzy chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
'Tis cute. Anthro? I think so. Either way it's really adorable. Your sentence structure is a bit repetitve and just a little bit childish but it fits in the story so ignore that remark. I might even read your poetry later. Good
shinco chapter 1 . 12/25/2003
That was pretty funny! He, he! lol! So, are you all gonna continue this or is the ending that leaves you hangin' gonna be it? lol! Besides the ending that leaves ya hangin', it was really good! Great job!
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
Not bad. Not bad at all. But it starts a bit abruptly and it ends so as well. Perhaps you could work on smoothing the opening and the closing paragraphs.
Apart from that, nice work.
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
I heard all about this! lol! Ti is a dork. But what would the world be with out her? (One Red-Head Short) I love you! SHAZAAM