Reviews for Excess
SuperNovaNess chapter 1 . 1/5/2004
LOVE it. it's great. i can relate to SOME of it. yay.
Crazy Arms chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
it's good. your getting your feelings out i can see. writing what you feel turns out into a beautiful poem.
Ravena Storm chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
Very deep. Very thought provoking powerful, wicked, cool. Loved it. heh did that sum up what I thought or what? You may only be twelve, but you're a great writer. The emotion in this was real, and it makes it a lot easier to read. nice one.
kujasgirl2 chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
Deep. Really deep. Keep up the good work!