Reviews for Slivers of Life
Mia of Orginized Chaos chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
Wow... That's awesome! lol It's got this.. flow to it. And of course flow is what makes poetry good. It also brings out a very true point about life and society as we know it v.v; Good job and I'll keep my eyes out for more!
Freshman Confessions chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
I like the point you're making, I really do, but I think if you focussed on one thing, made it more specific, it would blow me away.
take care.
cloud-shadows chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
I think that this poem really does describe life in a way. A very beautiful poem!
Youkos-demon chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
Very good. I am in awe.
Chambered emotions chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
this is so beautiful...it totally describes and questions society today...oohh how I love this poem! YAY! thank you for posting it...it was a pleasure reading and reviewing! Keep writing...