Reviews for Carnival
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
Hmm.. good.. sounds sorta familiar... XX XD
Verbal Essence chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
whoaa...trippy...dark and freaky, flippin creepy
good job
silverdream139 chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
Very visual. You set the carnival mood well, and though a 'carnival of darkness' is a slightly used theme, you revamped it with your own style. Two very nice lines:
"You paid full price to get into this eternal darkness,
The clowns really like you, child."
Nice work.
-Ari