|Reviews for The Shortest Time Travel Stories Ever|
| Sharakinpaix chapter 2 . 8/18/2005
Wow! What a concept! Love how Chapter 1 ended! I'm just a bit confused about the location of the audio recorder that registered a thick gulping sound; is the recorder playing or is he speaking into it, or both?
What authors do you get this amazing narrative atmosphere from?
The text editor ate some of the letters in "resitered," but otherwise, this piece is so well polished!
| Raven Aorla chapter 2 . 5/1/2005
Hehehe. I love that. Scientists do need to be cut down to size sometimes.
| M.P. Solo chapter 2 . 3/20/2005
I can't believe I never reviewed this. I recall reading it, but oh well.
This is a hilarious spin on the phenomenon of time travel. We all think of it as this amazing thing full of mystery and paradoxes and on and on, but what if it were to be done? How long before it just becomes some mainstream thing? I can bet in this day and age, with the kind of people we have in the world, even time travel could be dismissed as a fad before long.
And then to incorporate it into our daily lives...that's an idea in itself.
Here's hoping your latest wave of creative thought enjoys similar success. Maybe I'll be caught up with everything by then ;)
| Shadow Gryphon chapter 2 . 3/16/2005
Ok, that was great. Its true, though. We forget about our heroes so quickly...
Invest in crude oil!
| Shadow Gryphon chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
*laughs* Ok, so the title is accurate. That was just a little surprising. I mean, it does seem a little stupid to travel to where you are...
Short and sweet, as they say.
| Tessabe chapter 2 . 2/9/2005
Ooh, these were funny, great job.
| The Monolith chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
I don't know about the physics here, but it's just a story, anyway.
Getting to the point, this is an excellent albeit very short story, with a surprise ending that would insult most sci-fi writers.(But not me) A very enjoyable read and a whimsical piece of fiction. Good job!
| M.P. Solo chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Ha! I love how everything builds and builds, then slams into a brick wall. Perfect ending. Excellent story!
| BlackxWolfxPrints chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
hahaha these stories are hilarious! Please, write another! I luv them. Great job :D
| Paul Ford chapter 2 . 4/12/2004
The second story on here was hilarious. Good job!
| The Zaniak chapter 1 . 1/19/2004
Well...I doubt that reality would cease to exist just because someone broke the law of physics. Just like the justice system wouldn't cease to exist if someone broke a law.
It makes logical sense in my mind.
But I did enjoy this story, and am greatly tempted to write a time travel story that's shorter.
| Dagnarus chapter 1 . 1/15/2004
Good story, though time travel back through time is actually impossible. Only time travel forwards is possible.
| A.E. Castleton chapter 1 . 1/7/2004
It's cute. It was a nice surprise from normal "You failed" or "It worked just right now I have to make people believe me." styles of time travel stories. It also made me laugh which was a great bonus. _
| i lost my name chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
That was awsome. You're a frickin' genius. Haha.
| Werecat99 chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
HA! This was excellent! Short but effective, this story is a little jewel. And I loved every word of it.