| Reviews for The Real You |
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   Kate Marie chapter 1 . 10/9/2007 I like this! This will surely be ONE of my all-time faves! |
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/8/2007 Different than anything I've read before. I liked the topic, as well as how you put it. Interesting work, good job. |
| ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 6/4/2007 I love this, especailly how the last line shows how things can go eaither way. Great job! Thanks for the Reveiw! ~PottersSweetie17 |
| deo.volente chapter 1 . 6/3/2007 ENCORE INDEED! |
| Lacerations chapter 1 . 11/3/2004 i tot this is lovely.. the words so sparse..yet so powerful. keep it up! |
| In Memoriam chapter 1 . 9/2/2004 A very interesting structure, original. Well done. Recurring theme through out the poem was good too - something I find difficult to manage (At least, in a non cryptic way). |
| Jen84 chapter 1 . 8/22/2004 I love when all of the walls are all torn down and the real part is exposed. You were truly born with talent, Jess. Don't forget that. Jen |
| Bob n Kazzi chapter 1 . 7/18/2004 Wowness. I have not read one of your poems in it seems aeons but I am now and I am glad I did. I like it a lot, I think it's great imagery, and my favourite lines (I always have to tell people my favourite lines) are: - Peeling the who Down to the you - I love those lines! |
| Urto chapter 1 . 7/15/2004 I have a tendacy to at least glance at the work of anyone who did the same to my , poetry is far from my forte, as I usually have a hard time understanding it. So I was well more than satisfied that your work is clear and easy for guys like me to understand. Also, it rhymed which really takes some job. |
| Carl Epitome of Evil chapter 1 . 5/10/2004 I really liked this. I don't really understand the brackets though. I don't think it matters whether you leave them in or not. |
| Shuffle Queen chapter 1 . 5/7/2004 Of course encore...what kind of question is that? Very emotional and compelling once more...I'm teary again. I crave more Jess Angel! Later. ~Shuffle Queen~ *Brackets very cute * |
| Sa-ah chapter 1 . 3/10/2004 Excellent! I really enjoyed this one. Your words flowed well, and the message was great. *claps* Great job! |
| Lightless And Sightless chapter 1 . 2/12/2004 Bravo! *sigh* The ending was absolutely beautiful... I really admire the way you managed to link "the real you" with the idea of a show with all the [acts] and [finale] and such. Short, simple phrases that fit very well with the choppy style of the poem... great sense of disjointed rhythm. You outdid yourself again, well worthy of praise. |
| Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 2/4/2004 This was really neat. I usually don't like short stanzas and lines, but I think the depth in this piece comes from the imagery from such short text mixed in with the bracketed text, which was a great idea. Overall, you made this into quite a poem... I'd like to read more innovation like this. ~Lidless Eye |
| EchoesOfReason chapter 1 . 1/16/2004 I liked this...a lot! It very much suits and helps my state of mind right now, though I wish the whole disguise removing was so easy. But this is still great, you know, it really helped me. Thank you. I'm glad that it has meaning to it, something deeper than just words. Each stanza has a deeper sense to it that you can't just skim over. I like it, a lot! Well I can't wait to see more writing of this calibur. Take care, good luck, and keep up the great job! Love always, A-Light-From-Your-Darkness |