wow, this is really good. the brackets do add to it. the first act caught my attention because i know someone who used to cut herself... it reminded me of her... oh and thanks for the review on my poem! the angel is supposed to be part of me... i wrote the poem a while ago, when i was going through, um... not so good times. once again, thanks for the review. and keep writing, you're excellent!

I'm not a big fan of the brackets, but the poem itself is really good. Well done.

The brackets add to this poem I think, instead of taking away from it. I think this is actually a pretty good poem. A little creepy sounding in the beginning, but I really enjoyed it.
"Razor to graze
Skin the surface
of your soul"
It made me want to keep reading!
Great job!
~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

That was really cool. It was like you were putting on a show of someones soul. Really impressive. Thx for the review :)
SwimmerGirl
Swimming for love but lost at sea.

I appreciate your kind words on my poem. It's always nice to get feedback.
I must say, this piece is truly moving. It's mysterious, concise, and all together brilliant. I think you've put together a really creative poem here, it's like nothing i've ever seen. Truly amazing, truly stupendous.

lol, thats sweet, I like how you added [Encore?] I laughed, so im a little odd, leave me alone!

That was nice. I especially liked Act 2, but the whole poem is very true. Thanx for the reviews!

Hello! I'm Ishuzu one half of UK-Meets-USA. I wanted to thank you for reading our story and stuff. I love Buffy too (that Spike...) and I'm glad you enjoyed the references. It can only get better from where we're at, hopefully.
As for your poem, I loved the way you put drama into it by putting it in acts. The poem itself was great but that added to the suspense. And at the end? Encore? Definitely ;)

~ Very Beautiful and dramatic... The brackets look okay to me. I really like this piece. Write on...
c. butterfly~**

I love the way you formatted this; it was very original. Keep up the good work, and the good poetry!

Encore!
This is Kazzi from the partnership to say - hey we updated one chapter! lol. Please have a read. I am in need of someone reviewing me before I cry and curl up into a little ball of self-pity - not a pretty picture

Keep the brackets. One thing though: there are two [Act 3]'s - is that just a typo or did you have some kind of parallel thing going on that I just missed?
I like the poem... Here's something new.

"Peeling the who
Down to the you"
O I fell in love with that line. Melikes it lots D It reminds me of The Phantom Of The Opera with the dude and his mask )
- Crucified Sanctity -