The story is well constructed. The whimsical and mostly academic kind is cute and all but a direct approach is actually better.

The title reminded me of a Bohra Naono work.

I likr this story keep up the good work

NO! NO YAOI! eww... you ahve a good story here and i don't wnat you to ruin it... ack! well i really enjoyed it. you give description well and i like that! GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!
Ravage Blue