This story is horrible and I hope that no one reads this . The summary is deceiving because this is not about Rebecca at all. First you say that Clara likes David then Eaton and now Will. You say that Will likes Rebecca but out of nowhere he is in love with Clara. I think that Rebecca is like a MarySue. Also no servant girl would be that vain. I wasted my time reading this.

I'm enjoying this story tremendously so far. There are a couple of things that you may want to correct. In the British Aristocracy, I believe, Women did not inherit titles, so Little Bess would not be a Duchess. She would be Lady Elizabeth Hutchinson. There was one other thing in a previous chapter, but I can't remember what it is right now. Here are a couple of helpful web pages:

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wiki/Peerage

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WARNING: This story is NOT about Rebecca. The summary is deceiving! The prologue as well. She's barely mentioned.

Its depressing. The characters are cruel. The ending is abrupt. Don't even try to figure out who the protagonist is.

Beautiful writer, terrible plot.

I just wanted to say that I LOVE the ending. :)

cant wait to read the next one

I can not read this anymore.. it is breaking my heart that Will does not love Rebbecca... for those who have more strength to read on. The summary was not accurate because it is not a bout Revecca at all...

Wonderfully written! though i usually hate love triangles. I like to know who I am cheering for. First I liked all of them. then I didnt like clara then david then Eaton and Rebecca

now I feel terribly for the Phinias' though they are both much too niave

I am angry at Clara for playing with Davids heart and annoyed taht she paused to 'love' Eaton b4 she realised her feelings for will

I am angry at Will for stringing Rebecca along, and annoyed that he- ugh idk i just am!

Garrett Ellertson is my favorite character!

Whoa. Definitely different from every other story I've read. It's a very twisted story and I usually don't read them but I guess I like this one. I can't think how the sequel will plan out. Great story. :)

Do you have the sequel yet? I don't think I see it on your profile?..Hmm

Good ideas... keep up the good work

make sure to proofread!

honestly...this story was completely messed up...no offense...but u keep changing the main character...u've got to focus less on rebecca and more on clara if thatz what u intended...the entire story is in confusion...plus...you make it difficult for the reader to...idk...understand whatz happening...i really think this would have been a great story but u've got the totally fix it

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I changed my mind...I hate Clara, William, AND David, Rebecca...Although I still loathe Clara and William MUCH more. Rebecca...is too naive...put it in a good way, she's innocent, but childish nonetheless. I can't believe she accepted the fact Will chose her to go with him and never questioned if he truly loved her or not...William is the ass that shamelessly used Rebecca to make Clara jealous...and Clara being the shameless whore used David to make William jealous...People like them should be hanged...I remember writing a similar review about how I hated Will and Clara...but after time...I got over it...and David, I kinda pity him for being so blind...I pity both Rebecca and David, such naive people that can't see that they are being shamelessly used...I guess in a way I have a soft spot for innocent people however clueless and naive they are...

Good story, hate the character (William, Clara, Rebecca, David)

Hmm...I'm not sure I buy it. He seems like a devious little snake who's just messing around with the poor girl. Ugh, that would make me so mad!

Have you considered having this published?Just curious. I would certainly buy it.

da story was quite gud yet i dont fink dat ur endings very gud coz i fought dat u no if hez wit be rebecca den it would have been gud u made her out 2 b so dum but dat made it sad n u neva really paid attention to her brova n i fink claraz stupid fair enough u lyk her but i fink she dont deserve da guy coz itz her own fault but rebecca deserve will i donno y but dey suit fink bout it n if u want get in touch yh