Reviews for Sweet Symphony
Shinigami Clara chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
o nice poem... very interesting...and very dramatic, i like it... although.. a suggestion: try giving the poem itself a beat, a rhythm to it.. right now it's flowing words.. but it needs more... i donno the word... but right now it's more prose like with a quality of poetry in it... if you know what i mean.. i love the idea though it has a sense of power to it... just needs a tad bit of tweaking...(is that even a word?)btw you do know that you put yourself on your favorite author's list O_O? how is an engyptian tale going atm? i'm looking forward to more of your sotries and poetry though :D ... *dances in joy* exams are over for the semester! yes! i'm off to skiing! yay yay yay yay! merry christmas :D and have a very very happy new year

~Shinigami Clara
Fairy in Black and White chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
I love this poem. It's very good. I know I've read it before...and I guess I forgot to review. ...oops. lol. My only criticism is that the rhythm seems a bit off in places.
The Excessively Loud Waterfowl chapter 1 . 12/25/2003
good stuff. I'me very proud. It's all philisophical like instead of all dreary upsetting sadness. Yay!
P.S. What? Nobody else would review it! So I wrote the damn thing! Big deal!