This was such a great story. I really enjoyed reading it and it was just short enough to capture my interest.

Cute Christmas story! Love it! Please make a sequel!

aw... what a cute little story! it's definitely every girl's dream on x-mas eve!

This is a very cute story...I liked it a lot. Maybe you could've made it longer...go in to Ethan and Mary's courtship to further develop the characters...I really liked Ethan's personality though. Overall, a very pleasing story.

Oh this was a charming story, and just the right length I might add. The characters were wonderfully written, and I loved the scene where he puts the choker around her neck. Well, just thought you should know how much I enjoyed it! Thanks for the great read- A.K. Eighth

That was VERY cute... I loved it. But How could she love him at the end? she could barely stand him before... Thats the only fault i see with this plot :P but I LOVED the story on Whole!

A little fast-paced, but it's good.

Oh what a darling little story! Bellisimo! And it's not even Christmas. Lovely fluff.

this was the sweetest little story! i loved it so much! hooray for sweet little stories! rock on!
liriel

Cute!

This story was really sweet! I'm a hopeless romantic, and this short story wwas filled with warm fuzzies! I loved how Ethan helped Mary with the necklace. He really is a sweet guy!

Aw, sweet story i enjoyed it:) I look forward to reading your other one! Hm...about your other story...i know obvioiusly that there will be a point in time when Sir Alaric finally gets over his cowardliness...one thing i can think of maybe is on their journey his character is more revealed, perhaps he has a secret hobby that he enjoys..but the readers and Chloe get to know him better...at one point there could be a time of danger when Chloe defends them, but perhaps then there comes a time when she is rendered helpless and he must step in...for a cliché idea perhaps at some point the jousting tournament is placed back on (once the princess is retrieved) so when they come back he enters as a disguised knight and wins, there could be some twists concerning the princess that make it more difficult to retrieve her or once she is retrieved... i don't know...just splurting out ideas that will maybe help you get you back into the story...hope they sort of helped! :)

This story is so sweet, cute, and absolutely amazing! I like how you put the Biblical tale in this cool story. Ethan asking permission to court Mary - that is so nice. Please write more.

Ahh this was such a cute story! _ I loved it. It was very enjoyable and full of happiness. .~ I cant wait to read more of your stories!