|Reviews for Day of Love|
| elasandra chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Aw...how sad. Wonderfully written though. And yes, I have notived the people who give flames are usually anomynous.
| Kell Hound chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
very nice start. i hope you up date soon. now as for you putting my story on your website. im me or emial me about that.
| Rara Punk chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
its good but i do think you might need to do a scene or something of their childhood first - Allen and Liarra together then cut to the scene you have already written - just to give it some more depth. also to make the story more vivid to the reader talk more about the scenary - decribe the room she was in etc. also perhaps go into more detail of her feelings and describe the tone Allen was speaking in when talking to Liarra about his crush.
great idea though, i hope this helps