Reviews for Pretend
MagenDavid chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
My sister is like that. When you grow up with 4 siblings you learn how to hide what your feeling so as not to give them the satisfaction of knowing they hurt you.
*sigh*
You truly truly did an inconcievably amazing job!
XxCleverfool chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
I love angst. You write it so well. It's angsty, but not enough where it's overly dramatic.
anthr-gift-4m-hvn chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
wow! great rhyming! i really like this one. i'm gonna add it to my fav. thanx for the review.
like i said, i like the way this one flows well and i can relate to it. hiding the way i truly am at times. i'm learning to just be myself though and my Lord has helped me to over come every pain that comes along, even the ones that will leave lifelone scars. great piece though!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/21/2003
wow that perfectly describes my friend.. cool poem
Etheral chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
Whoa. I can so relate to this! Well-written! Great job!
Flotom chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
this is really good. it's also true.
OtakuSailorV chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
oh I really like this! I feel this way sometimes too! This is great! Keep up the good work! _ bye now!
Chaotic Ellipsis chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
Heh.. I really like this poem, wether it's because it's well written, or because it's how I feel on a daily basis... *shrugs* either way, it was very well done. *thumbs up* Thank you for it -Chaotic Ellipsis