LiquidHeat: You are positively cruel! How long are you going to withhold the updates of this story? I’ve been waiting for a year now! Do you understand that? A year! God dang, woman! How long will you torment this poor, unfortunate reader’s soul? Have you no heart as an author? How dare you inflict such, such…..something!

Stop dwelling on all that politics and poop!

C’mon! You gotta give me a break here really. It’s been a year! A year! Do you want me to beg and cry and do all that nasty stuff just so you’ll put an update! Damn! That’s just harsh! (lol)

Ah, getting better and better. For some reason, Jonathan is becoming more of a riddle and Jlynn is getting more interesting. Hm, I'm dying to know if she gets away from the psychotic bastard.
Good job! Update soon, dammit! (lol)

Sweet leaping Venus! This is brilliant stuff! I love it. So good! The plot and characters are unique and enthralling. The style of your writing is flawless! The sense of humor is awesome! (lol)
And what else can I say? We, Taurus people, are very passionate. We get what we want either by hook or by crook! (lol)
Update soon!

Oh goody. I like it quite well.

poor poor girls...and who actually wears purple suits? go techno geeks...not that i am one. i unfortunately am a regular geek who needs to get back to studying for her final
keep writing

Okay, so what's with you attempting to actually have a serious plot in amongst all the nonsense?
Not that I'm complaining. If the rest of this story carries on like it started, it will almost certainly become your best story yet!
Spawny